Tuesday, May 15, 2007

Fluttering in the spirit breeze

jayloo.jpgA bit from one of my NaNoWriMo projects.

Here's the beginning:

"You need to do something about this!" Oniss Larae demanded when Teah had joined her. "There! Do you see?" Oniss pointed across the garden to a tall pine tree. The top was like a spindle, bare of branches and needles. And from it, fluttering in the spirit breeze like two flags were the ghosts of Jayloo and Dandor.

Take it from there.
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