lonely
weary
trapped
persecuted
betrayed
infected by wanderlust
and/or someone who is:
an alien who can't get home
a cleaning woman who just won a seventeen million dollar lottery
a woman new turned to a vampire against her will
a miner trapped beneath the ground for three days
a cadet for the space force who has been kicked out of the academy
a wizard on the night before her 1000th birthday
You don't need to mention whose point of view or anything about their state. Work at conveying how their emotions color and change what they see.
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