How to kill your darlings without remorse

When Google displayed "How to kill your darlings without remorse"* in a search I thought the page might be about killing off your characters, which I have a hard time doing! It turned out to be about deleting favorite passages you've written that don't move the story forward. Ah, that's hard too! I do find it easier if I let the bit live in the story for a while, read it several times, until it loses it's specialness and then I can move it off to my "Cut stuff" file, which she calls a "Dead Darlings" file :-)

Novelists don't always know where their stories are headed. In fact, some of us never know. One way of writing is to imagine a good ending and then work out how to get your characters there. Another way (my way), is to hang on for dear life while your characters take you where they will.

Yes, this is the fun part of writing for me. The problem is that often the characters want you to tell parts of their lives that don't have much to do with the story! "Let me tell you this funny thing that happened to me ..." So, you let them ramble. You get to know them a little better. Then you quietly delete it later. ;-)

They say a sculptor views a block of marble, imagines a statue, and then chips away every bit of stone that isn't the statue, thus revealing the work of art. That's how I write. My "block of marble" is the first draft of my story, which tends to be at least thirty percent and often fifty percent longer than the 55,000 words my editor wants. But that's fine. I take that draft and patiently chip away everything that isn't my story. I am a ruthless scene-killer, an unremorseful conversation condenser, a wild-eyed wielder of the Delete key. I used to save some of the better quality material that I cut, just in case I wanted it later. But I never did want it, so I no longer save it. There's plenty more good stuff where that came from. If I change my mind and want to reinsert a deleted scene, I just write it again and make it even better than last time.

Is it a waste of my time to write so much more than I know I'm going to use? No, because all writing is practice for more and better writing.

I tend to think of myself as a very mundane writer, with mundane ideas, so when I come up with something that sparks my interest, it feels like it will never happen again. So how could I delete it? But she's right, as she says in another post. The more ideas you come up with, the more ideas you have. Often it doesn't feel like it! Often it feels like the well has dried up and you've used up your last idea. But the more you stretch your imagination, the stronger it gets.

"Killing your darlings" is what many writers call deleting paragraphs, scenes, and even chapters that they've spent hours creating--all for nothing, they often believe. But a writer who can't stomach killing any of her darlings is not focusing on the big picture: her story as a whole. You may hate cutting scenes that are hilarious or poignant or suspenseful, but to be a good writer, you must do exactly that. If anything that you've written, no matter how beautifully, doesn't move your story along, it will bog your story down. By saving your "darlings," you might be killing your story.

Here's a writing tip some of you might be able to use: After finishing your first draft, find the highlighting tool in your word processor and then start reading, using the highlighter to indicate all of the sentences, paragraphs, and scenes that are absolutely essential to your story. (I use a yellow highlighter to remind myself that those parts of the story are "golden.") When you finish, delete everything that isn't highlighted. Save it in a Dead Darlings file if that makes you feel better, but I predict that after a while you'll stop bothering with that.

Now you're left with nothing but story. Your manuscript is still in very rough form, but there's not a boring bit in there because you've taken all of the irrelevant stuff out. Now you're ready to revise and polish. I go through many drafts on a book, so I do a highlighting pass after finishing my first draft, then do it again when I'm nearly finished with the manuscript. After some more tweaking and polishing, I use the highlighting tool a third and final time. When the manuscript is all golden, I'm finished. (Two notes: First, the highlighter is invaluable to me because except during that first pass, I'm not starting at Page One and progressing to the end of the manuscript. I jump around, working on whatever scenes and chapters I'm in the mood to work on. The highlighting tells me what I've finished and what still needs to be looked at. And second, on the last highlighting run I'm just deleting words and sentences, not whole paragraphs and scenes. It's all pretty painless by that time.)

I love every part of the writing process, but bringing a story home--making that final pass with my yellow highlighter and assuring myself that every sentence, paragraph, scene, and chapter is "golden" satisfies my writer's heart on the deepest level. This is the best that's in me--at least until my editor points out something that I've missed!

Brenda Coulter, writer of inspirational romance books.

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*The quote "Kill your darlings" is much attributed. The original came from Arthur Quiller-Couch in The Art of Writing. "Whenever you feel the impulse to perpetrate a piece of exceptionally fine writing, obey it -- whole-heartedly -- and delete it before sending your manuscript to press. Murder your darlings."

Whispered in the ear

There lives a great person who brought peace to his or her land.

What no one knows is that an imp had attached itself to the person and made her or him do this.

Why? Is it a good imp or a bad one? Is it for good reasons or bad? Are there other imps? Is it to benefit the imps or the person or humans (or whatever race the person is)? Why did the person do what the imp told him or her? Sounded good? Threatened? Wanted to be famous?

If you wish, try writing an entry in a diary the person has been working on during the few minutes a day the imp leaves the person alone.

Nekkid

Use this line somewhere in your prompt: "I tried to imagine him naked."

The challenge, though, is to make the story not sexual. Kids could do this a whole lot easier since their thoughts aren't locked onto a single track by the word naked! ;-)

As an alternate challenge, use the line to create as many opening scenarios as you can that aren't about sex.

"There are days ..."

Toasted Cheese

Here's a whole year's worth of writing prompts from 2007 at Toasted Cheese.

Here's a sample:

He was thankful to be himself again.
You redefine the word ego.
He lifted the corner of the pink chenille bedspread.
She might some day kill a man.
A romantic, futuristic mystery.

While they're conventional, not specifically geared to speculative fiction, they're easily adaptable and avoid the introspective type of prompt that irks me ;-)

(Hmmm! Sounds like I like to avoid looking inside! ;-) Either that or I think there are way more inspiring ideas than my best birthday party and the most uplifting experience I've had.)

There's also a monthly calendar where she posts this year's writing prompts that are collected in a list as they're posted. The prompts actually go back to 2002 and some more extensive exercises stretch back to 2001 in the archives.

Out of the blue

You can use this as a prose inspiration too, but colors tend to make me think of poetry.

List as many things as you can think of that are blue. Then next to each write an emotion. Next to those, write a verb.

Now pick your favorite and see where it takes you.

Today's and Tuesday's inspired by Susan Writes where there are a few conventional writing prompts. (Click on the picture, then click again to see a much larger view of the gorgeous colors.)

Will-o'-the-wasp

A wasp is following your character.

It can be an ordinary wasp, of course. That causes extraordinary problems. Or it could be something else. What is it? And why is it following you?

"I write for the same reason I breathe ..."

Autocrit

Creative writing often generates flabby writing. That's okay! You *should* be sending your editor on vacation while the creativity flows. Getting out the ideas is way more important than proper grammar.

Ah, but afterward, when it comes time to edit, how do you get out the flab? Check out Autocrit.

Paste in up to 800 words and click Analyze. Autocrit returns with a check list of weak words. If you click on the check box it highlights the words in the text you pasted. Here's a list of weak words it identifies:

could
feel/feeling/felt
generic descriptions
had
have
hear/heard
initial conjunction
initial ing
it/there
just/then
knew/know
look
ly adverbs
maybe
see/saw
smell/taste
that
was/were
watch/notice/observe

Fixing them is another story, of course! But just knowing they're there can help with your editing. (Initial ing, Initial conjunction, it/there, just/then ;-)

(They also offer a subscription with more critique and some free courses and writing articles.)

Money for nothing?

"Why would anyone spend all that money on an interstellar vacation just to come to someplace so backwards?"

That's the beginning. See where it takes you. :-)

Flashlight flip-flops

Write a news report that includes the following words:

cantaloupe
toothpaste
guitar
flashlight
flip-flops

This is from Unjournaling: Daily writing exercises that are NOT personal, NOT inrospective and NOT boring by Dawn DiPrince and Cheryl Miller Thruston. Which lives up to its title. Kat and I have been dipping into it and though written for kids it can be a lot of fun for adults too. :-)

Writer's New Year's resolution quote

Take it with you

I used to do these every Friday, but with time less free, I'll try once a month.

If you don't already own one, buy yourself a New Year's gift of a small digital camera. Keep it with you and capture a quirky house, something that makes you smile, the uniqueness of a particular season so when you need to write a vision of snow in the middle of summer, there it will be! :-)

A walk among the dead

It's been quite some time since I posted a writer's notebook idea and the beginning of the year seems like as good a time as any for anyone seeking a new writing habit.

A writer's notebook is a place to capture ideas, bits of conversation, observations, dreams, words that capture your attention, favorite phrases, passages that you would love to have written .... anything and everything.

There are several ideas here at the blog.

Keep several notebooks. Keep a dream journal by your bed. Keep a small notebook in your purse or glove compartment. Keep one near where you read. Start a blog or a file on your desktop to capture bits that fly by you on the internet. (Though the physical process of writing by keyboard and perhaps even more so by hand helps you internalize the words.)

Today, visit a cemetery, preferably an old one. Try a non-Christian one. I visited Albuquerque several years ago and was captivated by the colorful shrines on the graves (many of them still decorated for Christmas). (Click the picture to enlarge it.) Here in Boston it's winter and the graves and headstones are covered with snow. Capture names and sayings. Notice the groupings. Once several generations would share the same plot but how often is that true in newer cemeteries? If it's winter, have people been visiting? Why do you think they would brave the cold?

Top 10 tabloid headlines for January 2008

They're back! While the Weekly World News is no more* :-( (though it is still on line), the City Newstand list goes back to 1998 so I'll post from the beginning until they run out.

Top Ten Tabloid Headlines from JANUARY 1998

1. BELIEVE IT OR NOT . . . CONDOMS FOR DOGS! -- WWN
   
2. WARNING: Someone may be snorting your grandmother! Teens sniffing human ashes to get high! -- WWN
   
3. Americans have the smartest dogs in the world! -- WWN
   
4. TALKING PARROT FINGERS HIT MAN -- SUN
   
5. COLLIE BIT MAN'S TESTICLES OFF -- TWO WEEKS AFTER HE HAD THE DOG NEUTERED -- WWN
   
6. Doctor vows to clone Elvis from a mole removed in 1961! -- WWN
   
7. Werewolf sues boss for time off during full moon! -- WWN
   
8. BEWARE! Squirrel brains can kill you! -- WWN
   
9. MIRACLE CABBAGE CURES THE SICK! -- WWN
   
10. WIFE USED HUBBY'S TOOTHBRUSH -- TO CLEAN THE COMMODE! -- WWN

* Ah, but there have been sightings! According to the City Newsstand:

From the December 2007 MAGBAG:

MORE NEW ISSUES OF THE WEEKLY WORLD NEWS?

— Special to the MAGBAG

More unconfirmed reports of new issues of the defunct Weekly World News have proliferated in recent weeks. A housewife claims she saw a Nov. 16 issue on sale at a Wawa in Egg Harbor, NJ and an Elvis impersonator swears he saw a Nov. 2 issue at a Terrible's in Henderson, Nevada.

The Egg Harbor copy was said to have contained the stories, 'SANTA'S ELVES REALLY SLAVES FROM THE PLANET MARS!', 'UFO ALIEN NO LONGER VISITS BUSH... nor admits to ever having done so' and , 'PACK OF WILD COCKER SPANIELS TERRORIZES WYOMING!', while the Elvis impersonator could only remember one headline from the edition he saw: 'Elvis is
Alive and Pretending to be an Elvis Impersonator in Henderson, Nevada!'

Subsequent trips to both stores found empty racks where the new issues had been said to be.

You must remember this ...

Rather than project forward, have a favorite character (yours or someone else's, good guy or bad guy) reflect back on what they did right last year.

"What if ..."

Pocket Muse

Monica Wood, author of Pocket Muse: Ideas and Inspirations for Writing and Pocket Muse: Endless Inspiration, both of which are full of ideas and pictures to inspire, has been gathering writing tips since 2000 at her website.

Here's a sampling to get you inspired to click the link :-)

• For the "cruelest month," [April] write about an act of cruelty that yields the opposite of the intended outcome.
  
  
• If you're feeling anything like me today, the words are coming very hard. Try a word-association game with yourself to get the creative flow back. Start with an ordinary word: "tree." Then start associating like crazy until you come up with something that interests you. Tree, bird, sky, plane, hijacking. Try it again, with "road." Road, asphalt, steam, engine, battery, assault. I've just talked myself back into writing.
  
  
• Think of two objects that are seemingly unconnected -- a house for sale and a model plane; a storm drain and an office window; a mantel clock and a yellow slicker -- and make a connection. Any connection at all, no matter how vague, will get something going.
  
  
• A good scene--in fiction or nonfiction--contains layers. In other words, more than one thing is going on, no matter how straightforward the scene might appear. To find those layers, keep asking yourself, "What else?" For example, you might think the scene you're writing is about a man discovering his wife's affair. He's furious that she's been unfaithful. What else? He's a bit smug that his suspicion turned out to be right. What else? He's disappointed that his wife didn't choose a more attractive, interesting lover. What else? He's insulted that his wife didn't choose a more attractive, interesting lover! What else? He wonders, maybe a little, whether he himself might be unattractive and uninteresting, exactly the sort of man to whom his wife seems to be attracted. What else?
  
  
• Why not take advantage of having been forced to listen to forty thousand versions of "The Twelve Days of Christmas" last month? Write something that exploits one of the twelve lines. Begin a scene with nine ladies dancing, or write about somebody who is missing five gold rings. A partridge in a pear tree might be a bit much, but you could make a little hay with twelve guys on drums.
  
  
• CRAFT: Some writers have a terrible time with titles, so here's an extremely subjective primer on choosing titles.
  
  The best titles, in my view, contain a noun--not an abstract noun like gratitude or restitution, but a muscular, concrete noun like lawn mower or blanket or streetwalker. Often, the noun has a modifier: "The 500-pound Lawn Mower"; "The Last Green Blanket"; "A Streetwalker's Bible." In short, pick something that puts a picture in the reader's head, along with a mystery. Think The Virgin Suicides. Think The Bluest Eye. Think The Sweet Hereafter.
  
  Verb forms make for uninteresting titles, I think, especially gerunds. "Disappearing" is my worst title ever, to an early short story. Gerunds strike me as too thematic, too calculated to announce the story's intentions. Titles like "Telling Lies," "Leaving Home," "Knowing the Score" (not actual titles, to my knowledge) don't draw me in. There is no picture to hang onto. Waiting for Godot is terrible, if I may be so bold; The Bald Soprano is great. Verbs can work well, though, if used as an imperative--for example, Come To Me by Amy Bloom; Read This and Tell Me What It Says by Manette Ansay.
  
  I also love possessives in titles: My first published story was called "Alison's Hair," and I still like this awkward, young story, partly for sentimental reasons, but mostly because the title still pleases me. One more thing about titles--often they will come late in the writing process, as a sign that you finally "get" what the story's about. What a feeling!

Up to no evil

No evil can happen to a good man, either in life or after death. Plato (427 BC - 347 BC)

Is it true? Is it not true? Does someone believe it's true and then oops? What about its opposite "No good can happen to an evil man, either in life or after death?"

See where it takes you for 10 to 15 minutes.

M.E.R.R.Y. C.H.R.I.S.T.M.A.S.

Merry Christmas! Here's something to do while you wait for everyone else to get up so you can open your presents :-)

What if the following were acronyms? What would they stand for? They can deal with Christmas or not, you decide.

NOEL
SANTA
SNOW
STAR
ANTICIPATION

And here's a present for you Star Trek fans: New Star Trek episodes.

Considering everyone's doing this for free just for love of Star Trek, they aren't bad. (Try one of the newer ones to begin.) The special effects are quite good and George Takei gets to show off his sword skills in World Enough and Time :-)

Hope your day is a joyous one!

"Words are ..."

A stork, onion rings, and some building blocks

Write a holiday or seasonal story using one of the following sets of objects:

• A stork, onion rings, and some building blocks.
  
• A gumdrop, a pair of snowshoes, and a bucket of sand.
  
• A can of soda, a romance novel, and a rubber animal nose.
  
• A new puppy, a silver bell, and a disguise.
  
• A cardboard box, an old car, and some peppermint candy.
  

Words generated at Random Writing Prompt Generators where there are several writing prompt generators.

A not so wintry tale

Use as many of the following words as you can in a piece (story, song, poem or whatever you come up with!) that isn't about winter or the holidays.

blustery
drifts
blizzard
dormant
mitten
frost
crystals
gifts
snowflake
pine
frozen
solstice
wind
wool
candle
spirit

"People have writer's block ..."

What to do after NaNo

Here's a list of upcoming writing challenges posted at the NaNoWriMo website. On that page there are also "Thoughts on publishing" and "Tips on rewriting."

• Script Frenzy - NaNoWriMo's sister challenge (April). Goal: Write a 100-page screenplay or stage play in April.
  
  
• NaNoFiMo.org - National Novel Finishing Month (December). Goal: 30,000 words.
  
  
• JaNoWriMo - January Novel Writing Month (January). Goal: 50,000 words, or whatever goal you set.
  
  
• FAWM - February Album Writing Month (February). Goal: Write 14 original songs in a month.
  
  
• NaNoEdMo - National Novel Editing Month (March). Goal: Commit to 50 hours of novel editing.
  
  
• JulNoWriMo - July Novel Writing Month (July). Goal: 50,000 words for a new or unfinished manuscript.
  
  
• 24 Hour Comics Day - (Changes annually, lasts 24 hours). Goal: Draw a 24-page comic in one 24-hour period.
  
  
• 48 Hour Film Project - (Varies; operates via tours around the USA, lasts 48 hours). Goal: Create a short film in 48 hours.
  
  
• Book in a Week - (Begins on the Monday of the first full week of each month, lasts one week). Goal: Write a novel.
  
  
• Mad Challenge - (Varies). Goal: Complete a variety of point challenges issued by moderators, including writing 10,000 in 5 hours.
  
  
• April Fool's - (April). Goal: Set a word-count goal for yourself and fulfill it by the end of the month.
  
  
• 3-Day Novel Contest - (August 30-September 1). Goal: Write a novel in three days.
  
  
• NaPlWriMo - National Playwriting Month (November). Goal: Write a play in one month.
  
  
• NaNoMangO - The artist's alternative to NaNoWriMo (June and November). Goal: Draw 30 pages of sequential art in one month. (Though try searching on NaNoMangO and the year. There are several communities that host this.)
  
  
• AugNoWriMo - August Novel Writing Month (August). Goal: Write a novel in one month.
  

Go outside and play

(Click to enlarge) Use the picture for a 10-15 minute writing prompt.

A few questions to get you started:

• Why are they there?
  
• Do they know each other?
  
• How are they related to each other?
  
• Who put the couch and TV there?
  
• Did the couch and TV arrive at the same time?
  
• Why are they watching on TV what they can see with their eyes?
  

Whortleberries

Use one of the following as a first line:

"I didn't trust a smile with that many teeth ..."
"Whortleberries and tart lime ..."
"The blue mists..."
"His compassion was like a shadow,..."
"I call it a filthy honor, when..."

These come from: Story Ideas: The first words.

(She has a couple more interesting generators there too.)

"The writing bug ..."

Truth is stranger

I could tie this into writing in a number of ways -- they all undoubtedly have stories behind their current appearance for one thing -- but I'll just let The Top 10 Physically Modified People inspire you.

Also check out the list of favorites on the right side like "11 phenomenal images of earth", "interesting elevators", "9 creative staircases", "10 of the best natural phenomena". The monthly archives take you to a page of summaries. Clicking on a title will take you to the pictures.

Splashed with white

Pick one of the following rooms and let the description inspire what follows for 10-15 minutes.

When you're done writing, go to the The Room Description Generator and generate 50 rooms. The wording in some is a bit awkward since they're all automatically generated. Read through the descriptions. Note when your attention gets sparked. While the writing won't be winning any Pulitzer Prizes ;-) the fact that it's so starkly descriptive makes the attention grabbing phrases stand out even more. In contrast, prize winning writing tends to be so well crafted that it leaves you overwhelmed with the writer's skill. This is baby steps.

Give some thought to why something grabbed your attention to help sparkle up your own descriptions. For me it was four things: the contradictions, the scents, the action descriptors and the concrete images.

Contradiction suggest a deliberate action with reasons that aren't apparent. Which is one of the foundational rules of writing: raise questions in your reader's mind. We're pattern seeking creatures. When things don't immediately fit we subconsciously seek reasons why they've happened as they've happened. Why would a grand room with dark rose walls have a packed floor?

The rooms are static but then the scents imply something has happened (again raising questions): a person has passed through (cologne), some event happened (mildew from flood or rain or broken roof). Sound would have worked too. In fact it's another of the foundational rules of writing: bring in all the senses.

While I don't know if the writer of the phrases intended the walls to be literally splashed, it's a more dynamic image than painted. :-)

Concrete images is fairly self explanatory. They create strong images in our minds: "warm brown evocative of cocoa" (also worked in a sense there), "The floor is a patchwork of small rugs."

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• It's a simple room, with walls splashed in springtime green and a floor that's peeling linoleum. It is adequately lit, though rather cavernous.
  
  
• It's a vast room, but quite brightly lit. The walls are obscured entirely by floor to ceiling bookshelves, broken up by lacy, pale pink curtains on the windows.
  
  
• The floor in this room is dark blue carpet. The walls are an ugly orange with a border of stark white along the top and bottom. An unpleasant mildew smell is noticeable, until the surprising draft from the open window dissipates it.
  
  
• The room is brightly lit, and expansive. The floor is dark blue carpet. One wall is carefully wallpapered in springtime green, while the rest are a warm brown evocative of cocoa.
  
  
• The room is brightly lit, and confined. The floor is a dizzying pattern of tiling. One wall is painted in the colour of eggshells, while the rest are lavender. A burnt odor is palpable, until the strong wind from the open window dissipates it.
  
  
• The scent of autumn leaves fills the air in this spacious room. The floor is a patchwork of small rugs, while the walls are cheerily splashed with white.
  
  
• The walls in this grand room are covered in graffiti. Strong cologne hangs in the air. The floor is an intricate design of ceramic tiles.
  
  
• This grand room is sunny. The walls are dark rose. Cigar smoke is noticeable. The floor is nothing but packed dirt.
  
  
• There are sheer curtains decorating the open windows in this vast room. The odor of unwashed bodies that suffuses the room is stirred by the warm wind from the windows.
  
  
• The room is almost lightless, and cramped. The floor is carpeted in nondescript beige. One wall is painted in a drab white, while the rest are lavender.

The Slider

The name of the book is The Slider. Write a summary of each chapter. (After you're done, if you want to see where the titles came from, click the picture.)

1. Metal Guru
   
2. Mystic Lady
   
3. The Slider
   
4. Baby Boomerang
   
5. Spaceball Ricochet
   
6. Buick MacKane
   
7. Telegram Sam
   
8. Rabbit Fighter
   
9. Baby Strange
   
10. Ballrooms of Mars
    
11. Chariot Choogle
    
12. Main Man
    
13. Cadillac
    
14. Thunderwing
    
15. Lady
    

"I have never thought of myself as a good writer ..."

First impressions

Did your NaNo novel finish the month titled "NaNo 2007"? Except for my first NaNo which was always called Flight, the other two were named at the last moment before I uploaded. If you still need a title, here's some title naming strategies.

• Use the name of a character, place or significant object
  
• Name plus some element from the story
  
• Phrase from the novel
  
• Line uttered by a character
  
  
• Play on words (common in the mystery genre, often indicates a lighter tone) (Tea and Curses, No Time or Treason)
  
• Play on a recognizable title (War and Pieces, Withering Heights)
  
  
• There's a good brainstorming process to use at Write a Good Book Title and Greatly Increase the Marketability of Your Book!.
  
  The author suggests writing a paragraph description of your book. From that paragraph list all the nouns and verbs. Then for 5 minutes make combinations of the two. Don't worry if some don't make sense together! If you don't like any of the combinations together, then spend 5 minutes brainstorming words related to your nouns and verbs then repeat making combinations. When you find a verb and noun pair you like, then spend 5 minutes brainstorming phrases using that pair of words.
  
  
• And another more focused brainstorming process at Title Creation on DeviantArt, which helps you play around with character names, settings and themes.
  
  
• Here's a couple of random title generators. The first, Random Book Title Generator, is completely random but comes up with some surprisingly intriguing titles like "The Missing Night", "Living Tales", and "Widow of the Prophecy". The second, Title Generator by Aabashenya, asks for some help like a verb ending in -ing, a plural noun, which, if you did one of the previous two brainstorm processes, can be well focused for your book.
  
  
• Alter phrases, epigrams, cliches, aphorisms, idioms: Cliche Web and CLICHÉS: AVOID THEM LIKE THE PLAGUE
  
  
• Use phrases from Shakespeare, Bible, and Nursery rhymes:
  
  A short Shakespeare list
  A longer Shakespeare list
  More extensive list (with links to sources)
  Several thousand (with links to sources)
  Probably the most extensive (listed by play)
  
  Bible
  Old Testament extensive (Bartlett's)
  New Testament extensive (Bartlett's)
  
  I want Bartleby's results to be better displayed, but there's a wealth of searchable books there (Bartlett's Quotations, Columbia Encyclopedia, Brewer's Phrase and Fable, Bullfinch's Mythology, author's works in the public domain and loads more.) (The books have nicer formatting. It's just the engine that searches all the books that returns some ugly results.)
  
  
• Be inspired by titles in your genre. The most likely part of your book to be changed by an editor is the title. Readers expect genre titles to conform to a certain feel, that is The Elemental Fire Queen of Goronji probably isn't a mystery. ;-) Here's some lists of books:

  Fairy tales
  Fantasy novels
  Science fiction
  Horror
  Fictional (not fiction!) books
  Best sellers

  Also try Amazon. Type in some key words from your book and see what Search turns up.
  
  
• And finally, here's a Fantasy Novel Title Generator. You can generate from 1 to 50 titles at a time. Here's some examples:

  Child's Discord
  Desert of the Shining Stone
  Eladian's Lady
  Dalisrte's Emerald
  Demon's Discord
  Heart, Autumn and Stone
  Hirorte's Winter
  Mistress of Pride
  Secret Hero of Enijil
  Spell Sea of Ortanor
  Spirit Citadel of Redudiel
  Storm's Fate
  The Destiny of Quainill
  The Elven Master
  The Faerie Demon
  The Fire of the Citadel
  The Illusion of Hirotanor
  The Iron Faerie
  The Trisimene Winter
  The Legend of Reduldas
  The Night of the Spirit
  The Pillana Master
  The Prophecy of Pilmene
  The Orbar Wizard The Repetidian Sun
  The Rogue and the Master
  The Rune Ruby
  Unholy Heart of Egibar
  Valdiriel's Spirit
  Winter and Prophecy

Last things first

Use one of the following as a last line in a writing piece (or your NaNo).

“It’s a strange world, isn’t it?”
"...and like that, he was gone"
You have no idea what I'm talking about, I'm sure. But don't worry, you will someday.
“Oh, my God!”
“Victory is ours!”
“And you call yourself a detective.”
“I feel as though I'd lived through all of this before in another life.”
“You can't hurt me. I always wear a bullet-proof vest around the studio.”
“Good. For a moment there, I thought we were in trouble.”
“Well, nobody’s perfect.”
"Guilty or innocent?”
“Like hell I would.”

Mostly culled from movies (since those were easier lists to find.) I'd list the site but ads kept popping up and freezing the browser.

(If you're curious about which movies they came from, click on Comments.)

Spadochron awoke

Start a story with the first word in the first sentence, second word in the second sentence and so on. Don't worry about

bad boy
spadochron
awoke
prosim
lamakausi
raucous
organdy
litareis
brown recluse
fibrosity
sublime
teasers
encausen
tsipouro

These were generated at Wiktionary by clicking the Random page link on a word's definition page. The cool thing is it gives you not only English words but words from some other languages too (defined in English). (Italian kept coming up for some reason even though other languages have more words there.)

"When I sit at my table ..."

Worldbreaker game

Worldbreaker is a collaborative game for creating worlds. There is one rule: Players take turns making simple statements about what the setting IS or ISN'T, or DOES or DOESN'T have. And that's it. He suggests 2 - 6 or 7 players. (There are also several stipulations at his website to help the players play nice together. )

Probably the best way to explain it is an example. This is from the "Four-Fold War" world:

• stee: 01) The world IS NOT spherical.
  
• mari: 02) The world HAS magic.
  
• curi: 03) The world HAS fluctuating gravity.
  
• stee: 04) The world HAS a wide and diverse biosphere.
  
• mari: 05) The societies of the world HAVE moved beyond conventional firearms.
  
• curi: 06) There ARE several random wells of raw magic.
  
• stee: 07) One society DOES "mine" these wells.
  
• mari: 08) The forms that magic takes ARE widely varied.
  
• curi: 09) The planet's plants and animals ARE capable of using the magic.
  
• stee: 10) There ARE at least three sentient species of animal.

and it goes on to expand on specific details that develop:

• mari: 89) There IS a group of humanoids who have combined magic with martial arts.
  
• curi: 90) The Avians DO HAVE a group of warriors who hide feather-shaped razors on their bodies.
  
• stee: 91) One group of humanlike creatures IS trying to provoke a war.
  
• mari: 92) The wandering god HAS gotten bored.
  
• curi: 93) The Plantlikes ARE using their shifting abilities to spy on the Avians and Humanlikes.
  
• stee: 94) The plantlikes ARE willing to unleash a virus upon the Avians to ensure their survival.
  
• mari: 95) The AI HAS a body.
  
• curi: 96) The Ursines HAVE made a pact with their pantheon representative to fight only in self-defense.
  
• stee: 97) The AI's body IS a suit of humanlike power armour named Cortana.
  
• mari: 98) The gods WILL destroy everything if total war erupts.
  
• curi: 99) The Aquatic race IS preparing to perish if they can't stop the war.
  
• all: 100) The setting IS called 'The Four-Fold War'.

You can see the full "Four-Fold War" world and more examples are at his website where, besides the worlds themselves, you might find an idea or two that might spark your own world.

Be thankful

You know those trees with the handprint leaves you write something to be thankful for on? Your favorite Evil Dude (E.D.) has been inspired to create one. Of course he'll use severed hands instead of construction paper and carve his message with a fresh craft knife rather than use crayon.

So, what's he thankful for? Make a list.

Happy Thanksgiving!

Watch for falling rocks

(Click picture for a large image)

Write a news report for this. Newspaper. TV. Internet news. Tabloid. Just because it's a real photo, don't feel compelled to tie yourself to reality! :-)

"I write first drafts with ..."

More plot ninjas

Seventh Sanctum has a wealth of information for writers and oodles of generators of all sorts. Need a less cliche vampire character? A sword of power? A god or goddess? Legend? Name for a gadet or dark ritual or disease or corporation? They've got them and lots lots more.

One is the Writing Challenge Generator. These ideas can be used to drive a story or you can pull out pieces as plot ninjas for a story or your NaNoWriMo project. You can generate 1-10 challenges at a time, with a complexity of 1-5 elements in each (or a random amount). Here are 10 randomly generated writing challenges:

• The story must have a jackal at the beginning. The story must involve an idol in it. A character is optomistic throughout most of the story. During the story, a character is attacked.
  
  
• The story must have a drum appear in the middle. A character becomes joyous during the story.
  
  
• The story is set during a funeral. The story takes place ten years in the past. The story must involve some musical pipes at the end. A character is lustful throughout most of the story.
  
  
• The story ends during a war. During the story, there is a need to ask directions. A character will read someone's diary.
  
  
• The story starts during a riot.
  
  
• The story must have a chipmunk at the end. The story must involve a bracelet in it.
  
  
• A character will eat a meal, but the action goes terribly wrong. A character becomes enraged during the story. The story must have a barracuda at the end. The story must involve a magical grimoire in it. The story takes place in the late evening.
  
  
• A character attacks someone. A character is negative throughout most of the story. During the story, a character becomes pregnant.
  
  
• The story ends in a sunken ship. During the story, there is an explosion. A character opens a door, and they aren't happy with it. During the story, a character finds a pleasant surprise.
  
  
• The story ends during a holiday ceremony. The story takes place in the winter. The story must have an elephant at the end. The story must involve a formal outfit in it.
  

Plot ninjas

A plot ninja is a person, place, thing, idea that you drop into your plot when you get stuck. Started on the NaNoWriMo forums from the suggestion that every NaNo book should include a ninja jumping out of a wardrobe, they've expanded to be anything that pops into someone's head.

These come from the Take a Prompt, Leave a Prompt folder at the forums. (Probably now buried in the archives at the NaNo site.)

Cut them up and put them in a bowl to draw out a random idea when you get stuck. If you're not doing NaNoWriMo, pull out an idea as a prompt and start writing. When you get stuck, pull out another.

• start your writing with a description of wet feet
  
• Dreams
  
• crumpled clothing
  
• a llama
  
• pink post-it notes
  
• three uneaten oranges..
  
• overhearing a conversation of a tourist and a local
  
• a pet curled up in a chair
  
• tumbleweed
  
• some moldy cheese
  
• a disgruntled landlord
  
• an antique quilt
  
• a picture of a gorgeous man
  
• an unusual locket
  
• an unusually detailed, oft-repeated doodle
  
• a Rubik's cube
  
• Your MC gets a headache
  
• frosted strawberry pop tarts
  
• old ugly wallpaper on a grandparent's bedroom wall
  
• a Halloween bucket full of candy wrappers, with one piece of candy still left at the bottom
  
• A water proof safe, Full of water, left in the middle of the desert
  
• a pair of gangly teenagers with braces, making out
  
• a mannequin
  
• a battered dart board
  
• a homemade birdhouse hanging from a street sign
  
• a one-eyed chicken
  
• a slimy slug trail
  
• Finding a stranger in your bathtub
  
• Getting caught in the rain
  
• A child with a pink ice cream
  
• The couple in the apartment next to you having an argument about a mysterious person called 'Phil'
  
• the sound of a prom dress being thrown away
  
• A notorious thief finds a baby in a boat on the Thames
  
• An unopened love letter from twenty years ago
  
• A broken doll
  
• A handful of sugared violets
  
• An angel on a park bench
  
• And a duke box
  
• a soggy cardboard box that has sat out in the rain all night
  
• a perfectly round rock with an X drawn across it in crayon
  
• Three people from the same office thrown together under canvas for one night. It's raining. There's no booze. There's only two sleeping bags
  
• one woman who sits next to you on the bus with her ipod turned so loud you can hear Christmas Carols, and it's still November
  
• A motorcyclist zooming by, wearing a helmet cam and a microphone
  
• two people walking down the street wearing a horse costume
  
• a piece of broken, dusty yellow-orange glass
  
• a camera with everything intact except the film, which is melted
  
• a row of empty seats with one in the middle occupied. Then another person comes along and takes a seat right next to that person, instead of an empty one further down
  
• a book in a foreign language with the covers ripped off, found in a public place
  
• a necklace with the cord snapped, beads bouncing every which way on a tile floor
  
• A lone operator working by herself all night in a deserted building
  
• A homemade lasagna falling as the cook is knocked over by a large Rhodesian Ridgeback (breed of dog)
  
• One very expensive hairless cat (cannot remember the breed) being held for ransom
  
• 2 people dressed up for Halloween -- one as Santa Claus, the other as the Easter Bunny
  
• A pet dog with a phobia of anything smaller than him!
  
• a chewed up pen in the parking lot (you decide whether it still works or not)
  
• a book in a foreign language with the covers ripped off, found in a public place
  
• a cell phone that fell into a toilet
  
• weapons, elements of battle
  
• The sound of sobbing coming from the attic
  
• someone finding out there is no water coming out of the tap on a given day (while they wanted to take a shower, for example)
  
• Several strands of hair stuck together with sticky tape
  
• Highlighters that have run out, but smell nice
  
• A cracked, glass statue
  
• a candy bar wrapper
  
• a broken timepiece
  
• a teddy bear with (detachable) bunny ears
  
• a puddle of water on the floor
  
• a penguin where it doesn't belong (say, in a house)
  
• A painting of a snowboarder, with a dinosaur hidden within the background
  
• a goldfish swimming in the toilet
  
• A palm tree oasis in the middle of the desert
  
• an old Underwood typewriter with the ribbon stuck somewhere between black and red
  
• a three legged cat, (you decide how he lost his leg, or if we even know)
  
• a bloody razor blade found in a public restroom
  
• A smell which reminds your MC of their mother's home cooking
  
• A dusty trilby lying abandoned on the pavement, and no one else around
  
• A frog that squeezes under a gap in the door when it's raining
  
• A wallet filled with money in an empty car park
  
• a purse - shaped necklace that can open and close
  
• a lighted train rushing by at twilight
  
• a pizza delivery guy delivering a pre-paid pizza to the wrong address
  
• a pair of mismatched flip flops
  
• a set of four spoons, all bent out of shape
  
• a maroon moose that sings Christmas carols. (can be a stuffed moose, if you like)
  
• the landscape of Cocoa Puffs...go nuts
  
• the moon as a consolation prize
  
• a broken doll
  
• Mindscape
  
• A doll missing one of its limbs
  
• The dog barks at midnight
  
• A shoe impression was left in the tomato
  
• A platinum ring found in the bottom of a bargain bin in a music store
  
• three rusty lug-nuts
  
• an old gas lamppost
  
• a throbbing headache
  
• a thrift store shopping spree
  
• a dollar bill with writing on it
  
• pumpkin pie
  
• An ornate clock on a wall
  
• the futility of sweeping potato chips off the side of a mountain
  
• A paperclip lost in the septic tank
  
• a half-finished crossword left on the train, that must be returned
  
• a cold, clear mountain stream
  
• a Chinese pagoda
  
• a shovel stuck into a mound of dirt
  
• a mislabeled lollipop--it's a flavor you don't like or weren't expecting
  
• a plastic green dinosaur whose head is a staple remover
  
• A pangolin
  
• A moderately rainy day
  
• A flamethrower
  
• Miniature Robots
  
• three old batteries and a change purse
  
• an unexpected strip of duct tape
  
• a strangely addictive song
  
• a purple permanent marker
  
• a barrel of monkeys
  
• a field full of talking flowers
  
• Three glow-in-the-dark Troll dolls
  
• Whenever I think of Paris, I think of..
  
• Fur-dyed poodles! (either pink or blue or green... I'll leave that up to you)
  
• a forgotten sock
  
• watching TV from a safe position behind the sofa
  
• a Mysterious Stranger (abbreviated sometimes to AMS)
  
• a strange cloud formation
  
• the sound of a baby crying, or laughing
  
• a facial expression completely at odds with what a character is saying
  
• an extreme temperature change, you decide how or why
  
• a dead body, killed with that shovel (the traveling shovel of death)
  
• a case of identify theft
  
• the feeling you get when you are in the house on your own, and you could almost swear that there is someone behind you, and it gives you a weird burst of speed, and you run into the next room, slamming the door
  1,000 baby turtles gone missing
  
• An egg that cracks open and nothing is inside
  
• A horse named Albert with OCD
  
• A girl named Doug
  
• A one hundred on a test that you paid the teacher to get
  
• The smell of the keyboard
  
• Ten chickens that have no idea that they are chickens
  
• ginger beer
  
• a fight/action scene at a zoo
  
• the last leaf on a tree
  
• Dwarf tossing
  
• a rescued turtle
  
• a British phone booth found anywhere except the UK
  
• three gold star stickers
  
• a mallard duck
  
• A cape
  
• a pitcher of eggnog
  
• a pair of mismatched curtains
  
• an experience that fills the MC with both joy and fear
  
• a dozen cigarette ends floating in a wine glass
  
• a man wearing fingerless gloves
  
• a dead shark
  
• a house with peppermint-themed interior decor
  
• a villain who loves pie
  
• a broken computer on a doorstep
  
• a trophy tarnished with age
  
• a ceiling full of mold
  
• a cry for forgiveness
  
• twenty ancient unopened jars of apricot jam
  
• a blue stuffed elephant named Trunky
  
• your MC suddenly finds him/herself in possession of a prized racehorse
  
• A very wet dog on the couch
  
• A cozy fire on the hearth
  
• a Dixieland jazz band
  
• A funeral where everybody's laughing and cheering about how the deceased will not be missed
  
• A black kitten named Matt
  
• a broken wine glass
  
• a repair bill
  
• a half empty Coca-Cola
  
• an old grandfather clock set to the wrong time
  
• the making of a salad
  
• a very old bloodhound
  
• hot peppermint tea with little mini biscotti from a boxful bought at Shoprite
  
• two blue ballet shoes and a claddagh ring (which have a relation to one another, a tied significance)
  
• a pair of fairy wings
  
• a stove timer that always adds five minutes onto the time inputted
  
• an unjust accusation
  
• the scent of freshly baked bread
  
• the taste of a lie
  
• a red haired girl with one blue and one green eye
  
• an ingrown toenail
  
• squirrels in the attic
  
• A flower pot getting thrown off a roof
  
• a dog kennel that washes up on shore
  
• a TV show involving robots
  
• a river without any fish
  
• a baby with colic
  
• the number 7
  
• a roaring fire
  
• a burning bush
  
• a dead rose in a vase
  
• a frozen pond with the ice broken in the center
  
• An impromptu dancing lesson
  
• A parakeet that can only say, "Schpedoinkle!"
  
• A single glove found lying on the sidewalk
  
• A car catching on fire
  
• a white tank top
  
• ceramic dwarves
  
• blue highlighted hair
  
• a nightgown in a washing machine
  
• a cat sitting on feet
  
• the ending of a video game
  
• multi-hue eyed girl!
  
• an illicit affair
  
• A horse named Albert
  
• A purple spotted toad
  
• A grandmother who thinks that she is a fish
  
• needing badly to go to the bathroom in the middle of a meeting
  
• a plastic carnation painted green with nail polish
  
• A red wedding dress
  
• Afternoon nap when it's raining outside
  
• A purse filled with brown leaves
  
• Tangles headphone cables
  
• The salt cap falling off while salting a dish, and all the salt falling in
  
• A train ride
  
• Getting pizza for the mixed herb packets
  
• Playing cards all night
  
• another character's perspective
  
• voices in the attic
  
• "I can't sit still."
  
• an over-enthusiastic nude photographer
  
• a pair of papier mâché clawed hands
  
• a midnight snowfall
  
• a selection of brightly coloured boxes in an empty room/house
  
• a light-up, plug-in, green gnome
  
• a well-preserved dinosaur skeleton
  
• a missing iguana
  
• gypsy dancing bears
  
• your character's reaction to running over something on the road
  
• someone wearing mismatched socks
  
• a niggling memory that you can ALMOST remember, but not quite
  
• "Of course I'm fine. I'm more than fine. Who wouldn't be with someone like you landing on me??"
  
• a messed up judicial system causing an arrest and detainment in jail
  
• fine, realistic costume jewelry
  
• a rickety, creaking white gate that gives someone away
  
• a spy who catches a bad cold at just the wrong time
  
• A hair ribbon flying with the wind
  
• a nearly-empty jar of peanut butter
  
• No two snowflakes are alike
  
• the lifetime of a $5 bill
  
• A toad under a rock
  
• a fake potted plant
  
• a vast array of staples
  
• an umbrella left in the park on a sunny day
  
• a strange light in the sky
  
• a sudden burst of laughter
  
• a knife with a dull, nicked blade
  
• Mug shot, toe tag and broken bridge
  
• blowing up an air mattress with a hair dryer
  
• a car stuck in mud
  
• A cat lying in the sunlight
  
• Odd eyes
  
• An unpainted dollhouse
  
• The last book in a series
  
• A dusty globe of Saturn
  
• The sound of thinking
  
• a consistent beeping noise
  
• a nightmare about a horse
  
• an earthquake
  
• celebration of a feast
  
• performing a ritual
  
• MC must taste chocolate, cacao, or similar substance
  
• a music box that won't open
  
• glass figurines
  
• a plastic lizard
  
• purple nail polish

Kitten Dream

Here's something Kat stumbled across and has anxiously been waiting for the owners to do something with the website. (She just loves anything to do with cute kitties!) It's the Chinese website for Kitten Dream, a cast of characters who appear in comics (manhua) and animation and lots of merchandise.

There are several 7 page and 20 page comics written in Chinese. The challenge today is to write English words that would fit the story. (Not translating. Just coming up with your own words.) What's interesting is how much you can get of the story just from the pictures. Note: the panels read right to left, but the pages for "7 page" stories are arranged left to right -- just to confuse you more! :-)

Here's the cast of characters (in English) if you want to use their names or get some hints about their personalities.

The "7 page" comics (though apparently they're only 4 pages long??) load quickly and the whole (very simple) story appears all on one screen.

The 20 page comics take a while to load (even with high speed internet) with one page per screen but the stories are a bit more complex. (Though we're not talking Shakespeare here ;-) You'll be able to pick up what's going on by looking at the pictures!)

(Some of the site has been translated into English but not the comics yet. The English link is in the upper right corner.)

"Stay loose and flexible ..."

The Evil Overlord Devises a Plot

Need some plotting help for your NaNo or other project?

Teresa Nielsen Hayden, editor at Tor Books, gave a lecture on "Stupid Plotting Tricks" at the Viable Paradise Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers' Workshop. Part of the lecture was way to use the cliches from the evil overlord lists: The Evil Overlord Devises a Plot From her lecture:

Start with some principles:

• A plot doesn't have to be new. It just has to be new to the reader.
  
• In fact, it doesn't even have to be new to the reader. It just has to get past him. (It helps if the story's moving fast and there's lots of other interesting stuff going on.)
  
• A plot device that's been used a thousand times may be a cliche, but it's also a trick that works. That's why it keeps getting used.
  
• Several half-baked ideas can often be combined into one fully-cooked one.
  
• If you have one plot presented three ways, you have three plots. If you have three plots presented one way, you have one plot. (I stole this principle from Jim Macdonald's lecture on how to really generate plots, which is much better than my lecture on stupid plot tricks.)
  
• Steal from the best.
  
• Looked at from this angle, the Internet's various lovingly-compiled cliche lists are a treasury of useful plot devices. The instructions that follow are one way to use them.
  

And she goes on to describe generating numbers to pick ideas from the list but in the paragraph below that is a little tiny "here" that will generate some for you. Here's some generated ones:

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Advice for the Evil Overlord:

If my Legions of Terror are defeated in a battle, I will quietly withdraw and regroup instead of launching a haphazard mission to assassinate the hero.

Advice for the Hero:

I will never allow fashion sense to prevent me from carrying whatever is useful or needful for the Heroic Struggle.

Advice for the Bad Auxiliary Character (Evil Overlord's Wicked but Beautiful Daughter):

If you have siblings, do not trust them. They'll only use you shamelessly. Of course if they're stupid enough to trust you, use them shamelessly.

Advice for the Good Auxiliary Character (Innocent Bystander):

Do not split up to search for the monster.

Further Evil (Advice on Ultimate Weapons/Spells):

I will also refrain from using the Ultimate Weapon for simply offing the Hero. If it's really the UW, the Hero's efforts will come to naught anyway.

Murphy's Laws of Combat:

• The most delicate component will be dropped.
  
• Success occurs when no one is looking; failure occurs when the General is watching.
  
• Everything goes wrong at once.
  

---

Also funny, but not included in her generator are "Things We Learned at the Movies". Here's the full list that's she's drawing from Evil Overlord Lists (including Murphy's Laws of Combat and Things We Learned at the Movies).

Fuschia volcano

Cut up the following words and put them in a bowl. For NaNo writers, when you get stuck, pull out one of the words and use that in the next sentence you write. If they don't make sense, edit them out later. :-) The point is to get your thoughts moving. (Though it's really cool when a random word sparks a neat idea.)

If you're not doing NaNo, include one random word in each sentence you write for the next 10 to 15 minutes.

ensorcled
bear hug
scandal
natural
flimsy
arresting tale
fuschia
volcano
superfluous
juniper
clone
absorb
emerald
weeping
tumble weed
brown sugar
thief
obscure
overprotective
serene
rivalry
tradition
black satin
lace
destroyed
caprice
emblazon
bash
dysfunctional
aflame
requiem
kookie
fried
awesome
unruly
apathetic
flit
hidden
damnation
frosted
holiday
nightsong
resistant
flying dagger
out cast
heirloom rose
crunch
ridiculous
entropy
improvise
babble
condemn
wimple
dead of night
plot
lucky
doomed
magenta jewel
spring frost
evil spirit
jabberwocky
seasoned
core
plunder
recognition
pride
ambitious
skeleton crew
glamorous
lifeless
oppression
religious
plead
humorous
superficial
gourmet
nobility
stargaze
sandy
mook
scorch
cream
machete
blackberry
wake
slumber
attitude
black ink
train station
era
abandoned
tower
grandiose
avoid
mercurial
manitcore
vestige
silver wing
guardian
dominant
disguise

What about that embarrassing tattoo?

Interview a character or characters from your NaNo novel or from a stalled piece with characters you liked.

It can be a group interview with questions each character answers. It can be an interview with a single character. I've done interviews with characters who are plucked from the current situation they're in. I've done interviews with characters after they've died who reflect back on the period the story takes place in. I've done interviews with characters immediately following the action of the story.

Ask them about their motivations. Ask them the questions you need the answers to. Your characters will tell you things that you didn't even know about them! You will hear where motivations are weak that need punched up.

Here are some ideas:

• How do you feel about [another character]?
  
• What are your thoughts on the events that led up to the crisis?
  
• Why did you feel you needed to [whatever event triggered a turning point in the book]?
  
• If there is one thing you could have changed, what would it be?
  
• Why do you hate your sister?
  
• Tell me about the time you ended up in jail. How did that come about?
  
• You recently received a death threat. How seriously are you taking this?
  
• Looking back on the situation, what would you have done differently?
  
• Are you pleased with the way the situation is being/was handled?
  
• If you could kill someone with impunity, who would it be?

"Trying to explain ..."

Some things we've learned ...

Some things we've learned from past NaNos:

From me: It's okay to leave scenes unfinished. The linear one-thing-at-a-time part of me is rankled but it needs to shut up so I can write. If a scene isn't working, it's okay to move onto another. Sometimes later scenes can help finish out a previous scene. But it's okay if you don't go back right now. NaNoWriMo doesn't mean it's a complete first draft. Some people don't even finish their books. The goal is just 50,000 words.

It's okay to call characters and places xxx. ;-) I never had to resort to that before but I have several characters who get mentioned and might play bigger roles but I don't know enough about them yet to give them good names. So for now they're xxx.

I like discovering things about my characters. I've found myself saying "I didn't know you had a sister who worshipped you. I didn't know you had a talent for cooking. I didn't know you burned out your own magical powers to destroy them."

From Kat: "Drop frogs and zombies with pink ray guns on people." (Which more generally can be translated into let wild things happen and see what happens :-)

Making up quirks can create more problems for the characters --- which takes more words to take care of. For instance I had two characters walking through the woods so I gave one a really bad sense of direction.

Eating and food are great padding.

Anyone else have NaNo tips from previous attempts?

Callous depravity

NaNoWriMo starts today!

Since your novel can go anywhere and doesn't necessarily need to make sense at this point, use the following phrases to drive your next scene (or scenes).

Or use them in a 10-15 minute writing piece. If a phrase sparks a great idea but you can't get the phrase in, go with the idea :-) Their purpose is to spark ideas not chain you down.

accident of fate
broken rules
callous depravity
delicately invisible
endangered heaven
fake maps
gold daze
hair ball
intended fear
just a sip
kitty corner
lacy lattice
mammoth bones
naked killer
ocean of storms
paint brush
quick cash
rain bows
saffron wonders
tangle wood
unlikely trendy places
vesper dawn
warm fuzzies
excel saga
yesterday's news
zircon vortex