Revealing secrets 101

There is nothing that will not reveal its secrets if you love it enough.

George Washington Carver   

That's the theme. You can use the quote in your piece if you want but don't need to. Just see where the idea takes you.

Velveteen poison

Here's two choices for today:

Setting: In a temple
First line: He paced back and forth
Words you must use: bolt, nightmare, sunshine, contaminated

Setting: In a field
First line: I found
Words you must use: poison, velveteen, kettle, trophy

These were generated by Bonnie Neubauer's Story Spinner which is both online and a nifty wheel you can purchase.

Most of the settings were conventional so if you'd like to use it, you might sit down and brainstorm a list of settings that spark your interest. Or use some from the following:

abyss
alley
altar
attic
bakery
bar
barrier
basement
bazaar
boardwalk
boiler room
breeders
carnival
casino
castle
cavern
chamber
checkpoint
circus
cliff
colony
"con"/convention
construction site
crypt
desert
dock
downstairs
dungeon
field
food court
forest
fumeral home
funeral
furnace room
future
garden
grave
grotto
guardhouse
haven
heaven
hell
hilltop
hollow
inn
island
laboratory
labrynth
lake
library
main street
market place
maze
mine
monastery
mountains
nightclub
outskirts
palace
paradise
pasture
pier
plain
pool
port
prison
private school
pub
pyramid
reef
repair station
restaurant
roof top
ruins
sanctuary
sea
ship
shop
side street
space colony
space station
stall
star ship
stockyard
sweatshop
tavern
temple
theater
tomb
tower
town guardstation
traveling show
tundra
tunnel
underground passages
underworld
university
vale
valley
vault
volcano
war camp
warehouse
waterfall
well
woodland
zoo

"To imagine yourself ..."

How to kill your darlings without remorse

When Google displayed "How to kill your darlings without remorse"* in a search I thought the page might be about killing off your characters, which I have a hard time doing! It turned out to be about deleting favorite passages you've written that don't move the story forward. Ah, that's hard too! I do find it easier if I let the bit live in the story for a while, read it several times, until it loses it's specialness and then I can move it off to my "Cut stuff" file, which she calls a "Dead Darlings" file :-)

Novelists don't always know where their stories are headed. In fact, some of us never know. One way of writing is to imagine a good ending and then work out how to get your characters there. Another way (my way), is to hang on for dear life while your characters take you where they will.

Yes, this is the fun part of writing for me. The problem is that often the characters want you to tell parts of their lives that don't have much to do with the story! "Let me tell you this funny thing that happened to me ..." So, you let them ramble. You get to know them a little better. Then you quietly delete it later. ;-)

They say a sculptor views a block of marble, imagines a statue, and then chips away every bit of stone that isn't the statue, thus revealing the work of art. That's how I write. My "block of marble" is the first draft of my story, which tends to be at least thirty percent and often fifty percent longer than the 55,000 words my editor wants. But that's fine. I take that draft and patiently chip away everything that isn't my story. I am a ruthless scene-killer, an unremorseful conversation condenser, a wild-eyed wielder of the Delete key. I used to save some of the better quality material that I cut, just in case I wanted it later. But I never did want it, so I no longer save it. There's plenty more good stuff where that came from. If I change my mind and want to reinsert a deleted scene, I just write it again and make it even better than last time.

Is it a waste of my time to write so much more than I know I'm going to use? No, because all writing is practice for more and better writing.

I tend to think of myself as a very mundane writer, with mundane ideas, so when I come up with something that sparks my interest, it feels like it will never happen again. So how could I delete it? But she's right, as she says in another post. The more ideas you come up with, the more ideas you have. Often it doesn't feel like it! Often it feels like the well has dried up and you've used up your last idea. But the more you stretch your imagination, the stronger it gets.

"Killing your darlings" is what many writers call deleting paragraphs, scenes, and even chapters that they've spent hours creating--all for nothing, they often believe. But a writer who can't stomach killing any of her darlings is not focusing on the big picture: her story as a whole. You may hate cutting scenes that are hilarious or poignant or suspenseful, but to be a good writer, you must do exactly that. If anything that you've written, no matter how beautifully, doesn't move your story along, it will bog your story down. By saving your "darlings," you might be killing your story.

Here's a writing tip some of you might be able to use: After finishing your first draft, find the highlighting tool in your word processor and then start reading, using the highlighter to indicate all of the sentences, paragraphs, and scenes that are absolutely essential to your story. (I use a yellow highlighter to remind myself that those parts of the story are "golden.") When you finish, delete everything that isn't highlighted. Save it in a Dead Darlings file if that makes you feel better, but I predict that after a while you'll stop bothering with that.

Now you're left with nothing but story. Your manuscript is still in very rough form, but there's not a boring bit in there because you've taken all of the irrelevant stuff out. Now you're ready to revise and polish. I go through many drafts on a book, so I do a highlighting pass after finishing my first draft, then do it again when I'm nearly finished with the manuscript. After some more tweaking and polishing, I use the highlighting tool a third and final time. When the manuscript is all golden, I'm finished. (Two notes: First, the highlighter is invaluable to me because except during that first pass, I'm not starting at Page One and progressing to the end of the manuscript. I jump around, working on whatever scenes and chapters I'm in the mood to work on. The highlighting tells me what I've finished and what still needs to be looked at. And second, on the last highlighting run I'm just deleting words and sentences, not whole paragraphs and scenes. It's all pretty painless by that time.)

I love every part of the writing process, but bringing a story home--making that final pass with my yellow highlighter and assuring myself that every sentence, paragraph, scene, and chapter is "golden" satisfies my writer's heart on the deepest level. This is the best that's in me--at least until my editor points out something that I've missed!

Brenda Coulter, writer of inspirational romance books.

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*The quote "Kill your darlings" is much attributed. The original came from Arthur Quiller-Couch in The Art of Writing. "Whenever you feel the impulse to perpetrate a piece of exceptionally fine writing, obey it -- whole-heartedly -- and delete it before sending your manuscript to press. Murder your darlings."

Whispered in the ear

There lives a great person who brought peace to his or her land.

What no one knows is that an imp had attached itself to the person and made her or him do this.

Why? Is it a good imp or a bad one? Is it for good reasons or bad? Are there other imps? Is it to benefit the imps or the person or humans (or whatever race the person is)? Why did the person do what the imp told him or her? Sounded good? Threatened? Wanted to be famous?

If you wish, try writing an entry in a diary the person has been working on during the few minutes a day the imp leaves the person alone.

Nekkid

Use this line somewhere in your prompt: "I tried to imagine him naked."

The challenge, though, is to make the story not sexual. Kids could do this a whole lot easier since their thoughts aren't locked onto a single track by the word naked! ;-)

As an alternate challenge, use the line to create as many opening scenarios as you can that aren't about sex.

"There are days ..."

Toasted Cheese

Here's a whole year's worth of writing prompts from 2007 at Toasted Cheese.

Here's a sample:

He was thankful to be himself again.
You redefine the word ego.
He lifted the corner of the pink chenille bedspread.
She might some day kill a man.
A romantic, futuristic mystery.

While they're conventional, not specifically geared to speculative fiction, they're easily adaptable and avoid the introspective type of prompt that irks me ;-)

(Hmmm! Sounds like I like to avoid looking inside! ;-) Either that or I think there are way more inspiring ideas than my best birthday party and the most uplifting experience I've had.)

There's also a monthly calendar where she posts this year's writing prompts that are collected in a list as they're posted. The prompts actually go back to 2002 and some more extensive exercises stretch back to 2001 in the archives.

Out of the blue

You can use this as a prose inspiration too, but colors tend to make me think of poetry.

List as many things as you can think of that are blue. Then next to each write an emotion. Next to those, write a verb.

Now pick your favorite and see where it takes you.

Today's and Tuesday's inspired by Susan Writes where there are a few conventional writing prompts. (Click on the picture, then click again to see a much larger view of the gorgeous colors.)

Will-o'-the-wasp

A wasp is following your character.

It can be an ordinary wasp, of course. That causes extraordinary problems. Or it could be something else. What is it? And why is it following you?

"I write for the same reason I breathe ..."

Autocrit

Creative writing often generates flabby writing. That's okay! You *should* be sending your editor on vacation while the creativity flows. Getting out the ideas is way more important than proper grammar.

Ah, but afterward, when it comes time to edit, how do you get out the flab? Check out Autocrit.

Paste in up to 800 words and click Analyze. Autocrit returns with a check list of weak words. If you click on the check box it highlights the words in the text you pasted. Here's a list of weak words it identifies:

could
feel/feeling/felt
generic descriptions
had
have
hear/heard
initial conjunction
initial ing
it/there
just/then
knew/know
look
ly adverbs
maybe
see/saw
smell/taste
that
was/were
watch/notice/observe

Fixing them is another story, of course! But just knowing they're there can help with your editing. (Initial ing, Initial conjunction, it/there, just/then ;-)

(They also offer a subscription with more critique and some free courses and writing articles.)

Money for nothing?

"Why would anyone spend all that money on an interstellar vacation just to come to someplace so backwards?"

That's the beginning. See where it takes you. :-)

Flashlight flip-flops

Write a news report that includes the following words:

cantaloupe
toothpaste
guitar
flashlight
flip-flops

This is from Unjournaling: Daily writing exercises that are NOT personal, NOT inrospective and NOT boring by Dawn DiPrince and Cheryl Miller Thruston. Which lives up to its title. Kat and I have been dipping into it and though written for kids it can be a lot of fun for adults too. :-)

Writer's New Year's resolution quote

Take it with you

I used to do these every Friday, but with time less free, I'll try once a month.

If you don't already own one, buy yourself a New Year's gift of a small digital camera. Keep it with you and capture a quirky house, something that makes you smile, the uniqueness of a particular season so when you need to write a vision of snow in the middle of summer, there it will be! :-)

A walk among the dead

It's been quite some time since I posted a writer's notebook idea and the beginning of the year seems like as good a time as any for anyone seeking a new writing habit.

A writer's notebook is a place to capture ideas, bits of conversation, observations, dreams, words that capture your attention, favorite phrases, passages that you would love to have written .... anything and everything.

There are several ideas here at the blog.

Keep several notebooks. Keep a dream journal by your bed. Keep a small notebook in your purse or glove compartment. Keep one near where you read. Start a blog or a file on your desktop to capture bits that fly by you on the internet. (Though the physical process of writing by keyboard and perhaps even more so by hand helps you internalize the words.)

Today, visit a cemetery, preferably an old one. Try a non-Christian one. I visited Albuquerque several years ago and was captivated by the colorful shrines on the graves (many of them still decorated for Christmas). (Click the picture to enlarge it.) Here in Boston it's winter and the graves and headstones are covered with snow. Capture names and sayings. Notice the groupings. Once several generations would share the same plot but how often is that true in newer cemeteries? If it's winter, have people been visiting? Why do you think they would brave the cold?

Top 10 tabloid headlines for January 2008

They're back! While the Weekly World News is no more* :-( (though it is still on line), the City Newstand list goes back to 1998 so I'll post from the beginning until they run out.

Top Ten Tabloid Headlines from JANUARY 1998

1. BELIEVE IT OR NOT . . . CONDOMS FOR DOGS! -- WWN
   
2. WARNING: Someone may be snorting your grandmother! Teens sniffing human ashes to get high! -- WWN
   
3. Americans have the smartest dogs in the world! -- WWN
   
4. TALKING PARROT FINGERS HIT MAN -- SUN
   
5. COLLIE BIT MAN'S TESTICLES OFF -- TWO WEEKS AFTER HE HAD THE DOG NEUTERED -- WWN
   
6. Doctor vows to clone Elvis from a mole removed in 1961! -- WWN
   
7. Werewolf sues boss for time off during full moon! -- WWN
   
8. BEWARE! Squirrel brains can kill you! -- WWN
   
9. MIRACLE CABBAGE CURES THE SICK! -- WWN
   
10. WIFE USED HUBBY'S TOOTHBRUSH -- TO CLEAN THE COMMODE! -- WWN

* Ah, but there have been sightings! According to the City Newsstand:

From the December 2007 MAGBAG:

MORE NEW ISSUES OF THE WEEKLY WORLD NEWS?

— Special to the MAGBAG

More unconfirmed reports of new issues of the defunct Weekly World News have proliferated in recent weeks. A housewife claims she saw a Nov. 16 issue on sale at a Wawa in Egg Harbor, NJ and an Elvis impersonator swears he saw a Nov. 2 issue at a Terrible's in Henderson, Nevada.

The Egg Harbor copy was said to have contained the stories, 'SANTA'S ELVES REALLY SLAVES FROM THE PLANET MARS!', 'UFO ALIEN NO LONGER VISITS BUSH... nor admits to ever having done so' and , 'PACK OF WILD COCKER SPANIELS TERRORIZES WYOMING!', while the Elvis impersonator could only remember one headline from the edition he saw: 'Elvis is
Alive and Pretending to be an Elvis Impersonator in Henderson, Nevada!'

Subsequent trips to both stores found empty racks where the new issues had been said to be.

You must remember this ...

Rather than project forward, have a favorite character (yours or someone else's, good guy or bad guy) reflect back on what they did right last year.